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Just Below The World

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Headaches and noises.
Tolerance and annoyences.
Energy and sleep.
Work and fatigue.

Quiet.
Awake.
Alone.

Sinking deep between
Lightness and darkness.
Memories and dreams.
Sleep and wakefulness.
Here and there.

And floating just above despair.

Living in a dream.
Just above a nightmare.
Just below the world.
Don't ask XP
I was split on putting this up, but.... here it is.
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helbdrache's avatar
i enjoyed reading this piece.

every line was tied to the next, and every block was tied to the whole.

my one quib is that several of the comparisons had words that are rather similar to other words that you used in different comparisons.

it is a great piece and i encourage you to continue and of coarse improve.